User Experience Text Examples / Dawn Kister

User Experience Text Examples

Published on September 2019

Original UI text string	Dawn's final UI text string	Notes
We’re sorry, the site is currently down. We are aware of the issue, and are working as hard as possible to return the service to its normal working state. Please come back later.	We’re sorry, the site is temporarily unavailable. We’re working to fix the issue as soon as possible. Please try again later.	Text for a Site Outage page
The services available to you (and their appropriate taxes) are determined by the country or region you enter here. If you want to order a service for a different location, you can change the country or region from the Shopping Cart when you place that order. Note that the services offered and the local tax may be different in the new location that you choose.	Your Service Usage Address determines the services available and tax calculation. If you want to order services to use in a different location, you can change your Service Usage Address in the Shopping Cart.	Comments from stakeholders and Subject Matter Experts: “This is great!” “This looks much better than what we have today.” “All kudos to Dawn for it.”
Perform and train team on scheduled floor and building inspections of managed site(s) and ensure team members are trained and participating. Facilitate resolution of all facilities operations challenges and bring forth solutions. Train facilities team to do the same.	Perform floor and building inspections Resolve operations challenges, drive solutions Train team on inspections and solving operations challenges	Rewriting original text to fit within limited screen real estate.
Our team focuses on improving the overall experience customers have when they submit a ticket to be investigated.	Our team focuses on improving the overall customer experience when customers submit a ticket that requires our investigation.	UI text for a team site, describing the work the team does.
Our team focuses on improving the processes around how the Facilities Management and Engineering teams (including our team) manage facilities-related tickets.	Our team focuses on improving processes for Facilities Management, our team, and Engineering to manage facilities-related tickets.	UI text for a team site, describing the work the team does.
A timeline for corrective actions is defined and a response report addressing corrective and preventive actions is received from Property Management.	Our team defines a timeline for corrective actions and Property Management gives our team a response report addressing corrective and preventive actions.	UI text for a team site, describing the work the team does.